Essay Services


You feel good. Your essay is pretty much there. But you want a pair of fresh, unbiased eyes to catch any errors and make sure your story is clear and compelling. Sign up for Essay Polishing and relax knowing you'll submit a clean essay that gives you your best shot at admission.


You have a draft, but you're not sure it'll convince a selective school. I'll review it for structure, content, and theme and within 48 hours guide you to a more engaging, insightful story that admissions officers look for. I'll polish up a second draft with proofreading and final suggestions.


You're starting from scratch. That's great! We'll kick off with a 1-hour video or phone conversation to discuss your ideas, determine your theme, and give your story shape. You'll submit a rough draft for feedback, followed by two more drafts so we can whip your essay into ideal shape.


Get admitted.

You have to write impactful essays to get into competitive schools.


I'm an award-winning marketing writer with an Ivy League degree and I can guide you to write compelling, authentic personal statements, supplemental essays, and other application materials so you can attend the college, grad school, med school, law school, or business school of your dreams. 

"You’ve helped bring this essay to life. My parents are astounded at the difference :) Seriously, I can not thank you enough." – JT, Massachusetts

Choose the level of help you need based on where you are in the process, how confident you feel as a writer, and your fluency in English.

Save 20% on your second and third essays and 30% on every additional essay, perfect if you're writing a personal statement and supplemental essays!


Write with the insight and impact of an award-winning copywriter.

I'm Bruce Jonas and I can show you how to craft your unique story so it connects with the gatekeepers of the schools you want to attend. Why me?


  • A.B. from Brown (magna cum laude, with honors, recipient of the List Award for Outstanding Honors Thesis) and M.A. from Johns Hopkins: I know how to get into outstanding universities.

  • Successful marketing copywriter who connects global companies like American Express, T-Mobile, and AT&T with their customers: I know how to write stories that convince readers to take action.

  • Alumni interviewer for Brown and recruitment manager for the Hudson Graduate Centers of Long Island University: I know how schools evaluate applicants.


 Your essays are your best opportunity to make your unique case for admission. Write your best essays with me!

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